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April 2, 2024
Episode 22: Making Your Subject Lines Fun for Better Open Rates

Making Your Subject Lines Fun for Better Open Rates

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About the Episode

About the Episode: Email is a sea of sameness. Just ask any sophomore or junior in high school you know: they are getting bombarded with thousands of emails and they all sound the same. Katie Mills-Erickson wanted to break through the noise to share the University of Iowa story. But how? In email, it starts with the subject line. Her tactic was to change the tone so they would sound and feel more quirky, more human, more fun. The results were astonishing. Email open rates increased by 20%, with some emails hitting open rates in the 80-90% range. 

In the episode, we talk about Katie’s cool “My job is Email” shirt. You can get it here: https://www.raygunsite.com/products/my-job-is-email

Key Takeaways

  • Embrace a Playful Tone: A friendly, informal approach to email subject lines can significantly boost open rates, creating an inviting first impression for prospective students.
  • Test and Iterate with Limited Resources: Even without advanced tools like A/B testing, Katie’s team made impactful changes by analyzing results manually and implementing feedback.
  • Context Matters: Using a playful tone in general marketing emails works well, while a more direct approach is preferred for transactional emails, like missing document requests.

Episode Summary

Why Change the Tone of University Emails?

Katie shared how University of Iowa faced a challenge common in higher ed: standing out in a crowded inbox. Many prospective students receive numerous emails that look and sound the same. To address this, Katie proposed a fresh approach for their email strategy: a playful, light-hearted tone that would resonate more with Gen Z students and show the university's personality. By moving away from strictly formal language, the team aimed to increase open rates and engagement, especially among prospective out-of-state students.

How Did They Implement This New Tone?

To put the new strategy into action, Katie’s team started by overhauling subject lines in their yield campaign, where they had an engaged audience who had shown interest but hadn’t yet committed. They kept the language casual, introducing puns, cultural references, and emojis. For example, subject lines like "It’s the joining a top-ranked program for me," with a playful reference to popular online phrases, helped Iowa’s emails stand out. With no A/B testing capability due to a homegrown CRM, the team decided to fully commit to their new approach and measure success manually through year-over-year analysis.

Balancing Playfulness and Professionalism

A critical element in Katie’s approach was knowing when to adjust the tone. While a quirky subject line worked well for general marketing emails, Katie noted that more transactional messages, such as “missing transcript” reminders, needed a clear, straightforward approach. This distinction ensured that students felt both engaged and respected, receiving the right tone for each type of communication. As the team expanded this playful approach to additional campaigns and social media, they continued to monitor the results, finding that a light-hearted tone increased student interest without compromising professionalism.

Challenges and Results

Katie’s team faced several challenges in implementing this approach, including staff turnover and limited technology. Yet, by fostering a collaborative, open-minded environment, they were able to build a team dedicated to experimentation and improvement. As a result, the university saw significant gains, including a 30% increase in open rates across certain campaigns. Even with some trial and error, they found that students responded positively to the unexpected playfulness, making emails stand out in their inboxes and improving overall engagement.

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People in this episode

Host

Dayana is the Vice President of Strategy at Ologie.

Interviewee

Katelyn Mills-Erickson

Katie is currently a communications and marketing professional at the University of Iowa. She has worked in higher education for the past five years, primarily in the realm of admissions. When not at work, she enjoys bad reality dating shows, attending college football and women's basketball games, and spending time with her three kitties: Gerry, Watson, and Lacey.

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